I really like how you only used one sentence to show the reader the two different sentence structures, normal and inverted. Your page gave me a better understanding of those structures, something I am sure that most readers would appreciate. However, sometimes the layout was a little hard to follow, and I felt that the colors were slightly distracting at times. But other than that, I found this to be a good page of notes!
CVCHJMM2011's comments:
Your information is very good. I am confused about what your notes page is about though. You don't have a title or anything. The organization is also slightly confusing. You have very good information, but the layout could have been a little better. I really liked your information though. Good job!
SUO-FEI-YA's extra credit comments:
Using a web to display your information was a very creative idea. It makes things clear, logical and evenly spaced out. The bolded titles in each box make it easy to find what you are looking for. The colors inside the box are also very pleasing to the eye. Your information on sentence structure was very useful but I am a little unclear about what natural and inverted sentence structure means exactly. You gave a very useful grammar point which would be very helpful to anyone who did missed class and did not learn that. The phrase you gave meaning fashion was very interesting because we did not learn that in class. I also thought questions you gave were very thought provoking and I too would like to know the answer to them. Good job!
Pai-Ai-Ma's comments:
I really like how you only used one sentence to show the reader the two different sentence structures, normal and inverted. Your page gave me a better understanding of those structures, something I am sure that most readers would appreciate. However, sometimes the layout was a little hard to follow, and I felt that the colors were slightly distracting at times. But other than that, I found this to be a good page of notes!CVCHJMM2011's comments:
Your information is very good. I am confused about what your notes page is about though. You don't have a title or anything. The organization is also slightly confusing. You have very good information, but the layout could have been a little better. I really liked your information though. Good job!
SUO-FEI-YA's extra credit comments:
Using a web to display your information was a very creative idea. It makes things clear, logical and evenly spaced out. The bolded titles in each box make it easy to find what you are looking for. The colors inside the box are also very pleasing to the eye. Your information on sentence structure was very useful but I am a little unclear about what natural and inverted sentence structure means exactly. You gave a very useful grammar point which would be very helpful to anyone who did missed class and did not learn that. The phrase you gave meaning fashion was very interesting because we did not learn that in class. I also thought questions you gave were very thought provoking and I too would like to know the answer to them. Good job!